So, lets look at a few typical examples of bad profiles: “I am not good at writing about myself, but my friends say that I am intelligent, professional, educated and ambitious. I am looking to a meet an intelligent, beautiful woman for dating and relationship.” – at first, this looks like a well-written profile by a guy who seems to have head on his shoulders. There is nothing “catchy” about this profile – there is nothing that would compel a reader to stop and respond to it.
However, it has one major flaw that will make many women skip over it. Lets look at another bad profile: “I went to school in the east coast, but now I work for a major software company where I work up the corporate ladder. I love hiking, watching baseball, and bbq on weekends.” – the writer must be reminded that this is a dating profile – not a resume or a sales presentation in front of his human resources department. as a rule, you should never start your profile by talking about school or work, as it’s not interesting and not really relevant to what you should be trying to achieve – to catch a woman’s attention.” “I love to have fun, party, dance, and drink of my buddies.
If you're extinct, contact me now." "I love a man in uniform.
By creating a filter, when a person who doesn't match your criteria reads your header they are likely to continue on.
Yet when a "fit 24-30 year old local male" reads the header, it attracts him because he meets your criteria.
These headlines do not stick out and they’re just plain old lame. In fact, studies show that one of the biggest turn-offs for men and women is cheesy pickup lines. “I might be the one,” “Howdy,” and “Looking to meet new people” are all overused headers and, for the most part, unnecessary statements.
Your presence alone on an online dating site already suggests that you are on the market.